farewell_friends
ubw newbie
Joined: Feb 06, 2006
Location: Canada
Posts: 18
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| Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 3:17 am |
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I.M On Fire
so i wrote that letter to you, over and over in my head
constantly reminding myself of every single word you said
so i guess tonight you'll adhere to an endless dream
and im expected to find the note that says:
"you left for me"
where is it proven that a conclusion to a life should be ended so violenty
and why do you insist of hiding your life under your bed
pushing you into traffic is something i'd love to do
but then i relize, that i would die trying to save you
now tell me if my breatheing paces are wrong
and tell me that you have learned to hate this song
my devotion to my emotion is starting to improve
havent you noticed that everysingle song is written about you?
having you seen how i've been falling lately?
i'm almost at the bottom
but oh, dont worry
because in your eyes: everything i do
isnt good enough for you
and all i want to do, is do the best i can do
so it started at its best, and ended at its worst
what ever happend to aruguing about who should jump first
you've told me to act the way i feel
so i'll just put myseld in a bodybag
and show you what is real
just you wait another day, because everything will be okay
just please wait another day, because without you, im not okay
because i am right, and you are wrong
but deep inside i know you've wanted this all along
people say that if you look deep inside a fire
you can see the blackness that it shines
so look deep inside my eyes and tell me:
is there any blackness that i hide?
so now im sitting here, hateing the fact that im alive
and we both know that it is my fault, that we're struggiling with our lifes
so here it is, a bitter goodbye, face the facts
because im ready to try
to dance the dance
and walk the walk
improve the talk
and laugh alot
i'll do anything to make things how they used to be
i'll change myself, and change how i see
all i want is to stop the mistakes
and i swear to you, that i'll give you more than i usually take
so goodnight and goodbye because im wanted
on the other side
help please?? |
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Aubrii
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 21, 2005
Posts: 151
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| Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 7:19 am |
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| farewell_friends wrote: | I.M On Fire
so i wrote that letter to you, over and over in my head
constantly reminding myself of every single word you said
so i guess tonight you'll adhere to an endless dream
and im expected to find the note that says:
"you left for me"
where is it proven that a conclusion to a life should be ended so violenty
and why do you insist on hiding your life under your bed
pushing you into traffic is something i'd love to do
but then i relize, that i would die trying to save you<<love it
now tell me if my breatheing paces are wrong
and tell me that you have learned to hate this song
my devotion to my emotion is starting to improve
havent you noticed that every single song is written about you?
havin't you seen how i've been falling lately?
i'm almost at the bottom
but oh, dont worry
because in your eyes: everything i do
isnt good enough for you
and all i want to do, is do the best i can do
so it started at its best, and ended at its worst
what ever happend to aruguing about who should jump first
you've told me to act the way i feel
so i'll just put myself in a bodybag
and show you what is real
just you wait another day, because everything will be okay
just please wait another day, because without you, im not okay
because i am right, and you are wrong
but deep inside i know you've wanted this all along
people say that if you look deep inside a fire
you can see the blackness that it shines
so look deep inside my eyes and tell me:
is there any blackness that i hide? << 
so now im sitting here, hating the fact that im alive
and we both know that it is my fault, that we're struggiling with our lives
so here it is, a bitter goodbye, face the facts
because im ready to try
to dance the dance
and walk the walk
improve the talk
and laugh alot
i'll do anything to make things how they used to be
i'll change myself, and change how i see
all i want is to stop the mistakes
and i swear to you, that i'll give you more than i usually take
so goodnight and goodbye because im wanted
on the other side
help please?? |
Ok i made a few changes/corrections which i put in bold so you can see them, hope you don't mind. I'm only trying to give you the help you asked for. I like this a lot, keep up the good work
-Aubrii |
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