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Kinkyfriend85
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Location: sweden
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| Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 5:34 pm |
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Since everybody else posts new threads for every song, I thought this may be the only way for somebody to actually give a damn to comment on my work.
May The Bell Ring
© Patrick Westermark ©
Tomorrow my child you have to see
Child, If only words were enough
Could have travelled with you
If all goes well,
We will together escape the hell
All created by wisdom untold
A yell for opportunity, may the bell
Ring
In our hearts let the wisdom grow
Let it never die
Like a grade of fade in our lives
Wisdom grows thin easily
I hope deepest in love for my son
My child, that I find love in myself
But time is seeping away
And therefore I seek before me
A miracle to tell in peace
Leaving the well of life before you
Is in grace instead of sin
If all goes well,
We will together escape the hell
All created by wisdom untold
A yell for opportunity, may the bell
Ring
May the bell
Ring
Ring
May the bell
Ring |
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guitargeekfreak
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| Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 7:53 pm |
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i actaully like this alot, it sounds really well thought out and well written, but whenever u post something, u have to patient for people to comment, but yea good job on this one
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Aubrii
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| Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 6:43 am |
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ok wait....did you write this or did "© Patrick Westermark © " write this? *is confused*
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Kinkyfriend85
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| Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 8:16 am |
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| Aubrii wrote: | ok wait....did you write this or did "© Patrick Westermark © " write this? *is confused*
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I am Patrick Westermark  |
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Aubrii
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| Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 8:28 am |
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wow..... i feel stupid lol  Thanks for clearing that up kinky
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