coolguyguy
ubw newbie
Joined: Feb 23, 2005
Location: manteca CA.
Posts: 15
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| Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 11:32 am |
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[align=center]Me Vs. The Waves
Hello, the shadows are on the wall.
Never leaving me alone at all.
All thse things I knew before.
As I push the waves back from the shore.
I thought about this for dazs on end.
Not knowing how it would end.
Ch.1 The waves keep coming.
I cant hold them back.
Will it over take me?
Ch.2 The waves keep coming back.
And it will over take me.
As I walk the days filled with doubt.
Never knowing how it would turn out.
I wanted it to work but you only made it hurt.
Ch.1 The waves keep coming.
I cant hold them back.
will it over take me?
Ch.2 The waves keep coming back.
And it will over take me.
I cant hold on anymore.
The waves have taken me from the shore.
There taking me under, I fear I wont last.
I hope zour happy and put me in your past.
Outro
The waves have come and have taken me under.
I struggled so hard to put you in my past.
And the waves have come_____ (Fade) |
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Aubrii
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 21, 2005
Posts: 152
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| Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 7:08 am |
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good work, i've never seen a song layout with two ch's, very original in my opinion.
"I thought about this for dazs on end"
"dazs" = "days"?
"I hope zour happy and put me in your past."
guessing that's "you're"
typos are ok to have, i do that all the time  Good song my friend, do you have a site where i can actually hear your work? I'd love to hear your songs
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