Dedicating Your Life To A Liar

ubw newbie Joined: Feb 06, 2006 Location: Canada Posts: 18

Dedicating your life to a liar

Don’t try blaming this on bad luck because we all know that you’ve been expecting this
I’ve tried so hard to help you learn how to easily except it
But the worlds dieing out, and they people, well there dull
Just like a bed of roses they’re a ton of reasons in this gun
Now I'm driven to be ten times better than you think you are
Piece my piece I've built my walls
And burned the bridges down
That lead back to people like you
People who take everyone and everything out of your life
And at the end, I've realized, I'm so happy to be alive
You haven’t sinned, so don’t apologize
And don’t change into someone that your mirror won’t recognize
Just live and breathe
and try not to die again

So here’s the truth and about the truth
It’s like waking up from an overdose and realizing you’re still alive
Why don’t you take a break from a life of lies?
And slowly, die away

If you apologize one more time,
I swear I'll cut you down and throw you to the ground.
I won't accept these words that are killing me
and if you don't mind then I won't mind I'll just die here quietly
I was never capable at goodbyes, or decent and apologies
And I have no intention of saying goodbye
Because you know that I’ve been perfecting my words
And don’t you know that I would honestly die for you
But when you just about gone?
Would you die for me to?
calm down, gradually
its the least you can do
because just before you got here i was going to jump too
Your life is something of a hurricane with the heaviest wind
And I was just lucky enough to get sucked and pulled in
Maybe you can make a splint for your broken ego
And try a bit harder to understand who I am

Everything I’ve said to you was also true
But my fingers where crossed when I promised this world to you

ya so please comment this...i really need help on lyrics because ive got a gig in three days so....pllleeasseee

Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 11:33 am

I liked it itàs pretty good

ubw rookie Joined: Aug 21, 2005 Posts: 152

wow, you're really talented. I love these lines "You haven’t sinned, so don’t apologize
And don’t change into someone that your mirror won’t recognize" I donno why but those stood out to me.

there we also some spots that kind of bothered me though (just my opinions) :

"But the worlds dieing out, and they people, well there dull "
I would change it to say
"But the worlds dieing out, and the people are dull"
The "well" kind takes away from the effect of the song

"and if you don't mind then I won't mind I'll just die here quietly "
i don't know how i would change it because it all deprends on what the song sounds like. If this line sounds good with the song then it works. Maybe i'd change it to say
"and if you don't mind, then i don't either, i'll just die here quietly"
hrmmm...i donno. it all really soes depend on the song. It's just the fact that there's two "mind"s that bothers me. Now i'm just babbeling, sorry.

Over all, great lyrics, you're a wonderful artist. Btw where's your gig? Maybe i can get people to go or i can go. I'm interested in hearing more from you Farewell. Keep up the good work Smile

-Aubrii

ubw newbie Joined: Dec 18, 2005 Posts: 1

Actually, he's not that good artist...

The biggest part of these lyrics (including the outstanding ones you mentioned)
Are taken from:

Atreyu - The Crimson
Atreyu - You Eclipsed Me
My Chemical Romance - Demolition Lovers

I also remember the title from somewhere...
No offense, I just wanted to clear things up,
Have a lot of fun with your gig!

ubw rookie Joined: Aug 21, 2005 Posts: 152

interesting....hmm, farewell, have anything to say about Odohim 's acusations? Any of them true?

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