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Littleneatie
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Joined: Jul 28, 2005
Posts: 5
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| Posted: Tue May 02, 2006 10:34 am |
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Success – you’re so popular
Ever so quiet - they disappear
Flesh and blood - so much to fear
Caught up in your words – I am here
So good, so misunderstood
Just waiting, you need something
You need someone
Just one day maybe they’ll see
Gotta celebrate the living, it’s so easy
Nobody sees me now
Nobody reads me now
Line after line, time after time
My creativity shines
Nowhere to be seen
Nobody reads me now
Nobody reads me now
Mess-up – they’re so cynical
Ever so hard - they never call
Black and white – somewhere to fall
Caught up in your lies – build the wall
So good, so misunderstood
Just waiting, you need something
You need someone
Just one day maybe they’ll see
Gotta celebrate the living, it’s so easy
Nobody sees me now
Nobody reads me now
Line after line, time after time
My creativity shines
Nowhere to be seen
Nobody reads me now
Nobody reads me now
Lyrics by
Charlotte Alexander
© Comingouttheotherside 2006 |
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Kinkyfriend85
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Joined: Feb 16, 2005
Location: sweden
Posts: 21
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| Posted: Tue May 02, 2006 1:03 pm |
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It's cool, but I think I'd write it differently, though don't let me throw away all your confidence  |
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allgenre4545
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Joined: May 01, 2006
Posts: 7
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| Posted: Fri May 05, 2006 10:02 pm |
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i like those lyrics a lot. |
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guitargeekfreak
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Joined: May 07, 2006
Posts: 23
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| Posted: Mon May 08, 2006 7:53 pm |
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they r good, but sad, but awsome job! keep up the great work! |
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