RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 8:02 pm |
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Hello again....,
I wrote this thinking of the expression some people use to say they're tempted to do/say something- "I've got an itch to tell you where to go..." I, myself, have expressed my views of a lot of our society, in other posts I've made here. I don't like people who look at others, and if they think they're ugly, they'll cringe. I'm kind to everyone I meet, unless they give a reason (such as that) not to be. If someone doesn't like me, they have feet to carry their judgements and selves away from me. It's called "The Uncurable Itch", and it's the last one I'm posting, 'cause it's the only one left. heheh. 
"The Uncurable Itch"
-Rick, "RiCterMan," Strayer, fecit.
I've got an itch
to inquire to the government,
to see if maybe they'll send me to outer-space.
I figure there it would be free of arrogance,
seen in the eyes of society's "majority face."
Sometimes an itch burns,
becoming a bother.
Sometimes my feet hurt
from roaming with idiots.
(Chorus):
Can anybody find a cure,
to heal
this ever-present, unrequested itch?
Anyone with eyes focused, and unobscured
can feel
this great neglect, and this understated itch.
I doubt a cure exists.
I never scratch,
though I have no fear of consequence.
My hands are tied, as I watch all the fools race.
They do deserve to be dropped, by a sudden leg
stretching a foot, without risk of their sharp teeth.
Sometimes an itch burns.
Sometimes it festers.
Sometimes I may feel perturbed,
but I never fear idiots.
(Chorus)
(Short Interlude, envisioned.)
(Next two lines repeat one time more):
I'd love to scrape this itch
right off of the Earth.
I'd only save one wish,
for if wishes really could come true:
I'd wish to scrape or heal the itch,
before we all begin to bruise.
(Chorus)
EnD
I wrote this one about ten hours ago... I'd probably say this one if the most satisfying, out of the four I've completed in the last couple days. Feel free to share opinions; criticisms. That's one of the reasons I share the stuff I write... Later, people...! |
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