unknownquantity
ubw newbie
Joined: Apr 01, 2006
Posts: 14
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| Posted: Wed Apr 12, 2006 8:18 am |
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Verse1:
I'll write you a love song,
With your name in the title,
Then maybe you'll understand,
What you mean to me,
A minor melody, some soppy words to,
A major chord or a few,
A slow first verse,
Then the drums kick in,
Chorus:
With memories here to guide us,
and love to show the way,
What went wrong is just the past,
It won't come between us.
Verse2:
Hand in hand, the way it's meant to be,
It was this simple rythym ending in C
More and more, These words are making less sense,
But that doesn't realy matter
Chrous
Solo(guitar)
Chorus
I'm not to sure on this but feedback would be most helpful  |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 8:09 pm |
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It's good... Romantic songs shouldn't be as much about skill with writing, as they are about expressing emotions about the one who inspired you. -not that any writing should focus on showing skill... But you get the point. Good job on this enjoyable piece of lyrics.  Later! |
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