"ignorance is bliss"

ubw newbie Joined: Apr 01, 2006 Posts: 14

My first work, feeback would be much apreciated Smile

Verse:
I have never seen some one as,
Beautiful as you.

I have never felt this way before,
It must be you.

That perfect smile is enough to light up,
Even the darkest day.

I’m loosing sleep just thinking about you,
Even though you’re a dream.

Chorus:
If only it didn’t hurt to know,
That we will never be more than friends.
Then maybe I could let it be, but I can’t
My hopes and dreams and aspirations, are gone

Verse 2:
I have longed for the warmth of your kiss,
Each and everyday

I want to say that I love you,
In so many different ways

Cold and broken I sit on my own,
Wondering why this is happening?

With eyes like diamonds, worth the world to me
I want you to be mine

Chorus

Bridge:
This sweet ignorance is bliss
I’m falling from grace

This sweet summer rain
Numbs this feeling

Chorus

ubw newbie Joined: Mar 20, 2006 Location: Ct Posts: 12

This is a pretty good peice dude, i like the bridge and the overall verses are down to earth, any person can relate, its what happens when yur crazy about a person, the only part that i kinda disliked was the multiple useage of the word "you" in the first few verses, other than that it ws good, try to record it and post it up if u can.

ubw newbie Joined: Apr 01, 2006 Posts: 14

chears for the feedback much apreciated, and thanks for the advice the verse now use "as beautifull as this" rather than you.

"ignorance is bliss"

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