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over-drive
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Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Rotherham
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| Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 3:10 pm |
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I finished this 2 min ago i think it is ok but what do you think
How Does It Feel?
How does it feel to know your world has come crashing down?
And everyone that you knew has now gone
How does it feel you’re by yourself again?
How does it feel, I’m going crazy but until then
If there’s anything that you want to say
Say it now before it is too late
‘Coz I don’t think I can stand the wait again
It’s that that pushes people apart
How does it feel to know your world has come crashing down?
And everyone that you knew has now gone
How does it feel you’re by yourself again?
How does it feel, I’m going crazy but until then
No ones life ever ends with a happy ending
Usually it crumbles before it has chance to starts
How does it feel how does it feel?
To know that when it comes down you lost again
How does it feel to know your world has come crashing down?
And everyone that you knew has now gone
How does it feel you’re by yourself again?
How does it feel, I’m going crazy but until then
(Key change of two semi-tones)
How does it feel to know your world has come crashing down?
And everyone that you knew has now gone
How does it feel you’re by yourself again?
How does it feel, I’m going crazy but until then |
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bloodlist
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Joined: Mar 19, 2006
Location: Rotherham
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| Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 10:33 am |
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NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! nuff said |
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over-drive
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Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Rotherham
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 4:28 pm |
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i changed some of it around, verse two first to lines are now
You missed your chance now silence is golden
I ask you again 'Why is this broken'
Major or what !
Might uplaod it soon as i have it recorded |
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words
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Joined: Mar 22, 2006
Posts: 13
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| Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 4:09 am |
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it feels like all your lifes been a story
and every chapter you write is another part of the journey
and every experience in life is to be lived with sojourny
and all the troble and strife is to be enjoyed in its mourning
but when your back at square one
and youve lost the only thing youve had all along
and the words to your song dont speak of a life we all long
and youve failed again just when youd thought that youd actualy won
theres no sun to revel in after that deed is done
yet again the world is so large with oppotunities smal
the life that you fought for now means nothing at all
only pain and regret for the things that have left
and the reailisation that maybe 'that was the best'
and now you have to start a new book because nowthe old one is recked
and the first chaper starts off with 'yet again he has nothing left'
i feel your pain mate and i think in a way yours is beautifull. i just rhym for the sake of it im not trying to be smart. |
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