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chris868
ubw newbie
Joined: Feb 15, 2006
Location: Easton, PA
Posts: 4
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| Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 11:37 pm |
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Intro:
Two months spent buying yesterday
No receipt to return, it’s better broken anyways
Just friends patrolling delicate boundaries
You say we’re on good terms
But your terms aren’t the same as these
V1:
Well did the tip of my iceberg
Rip a whole in your boat
Your, actually lucky
The rest would have broken your nose
Why did you ask for my blessing?
To go behind my back
Please don’t think that when I don’t ask for yours
It’s a secret counter attack
Now I know she’s your friend
Cause she’s my friend too
But I’m looking for more
Let me guess, that’s not ok with you
But in this world that we live in
Your responses are already said
Before you even reflect about
Saturated in a plastic pale disguise
Chorus:
No need to justify
I think I see what’s going on
Your logic is awfully sound
Too bad it’s bleeding out your eyes
No worries it’s not that noticeable
Saturated in a plastic pale disguise
V2:
Who’s behind all these standards?
We yield too like forty foot walls
Did the writers of the O.C. really build them that tall?
Or was it the magazine cover
Ornate, with temptations and lies
At least its distracting enough
To help me forget about my life
And even though it’s just pop culture
Even though it’s all pretend
The image gets glued to the backs
Ya, the backs of our heads
So when we’re out
You know we’re living it up
Drink after drink drown the defense
Till all that’s left are lines
Traced around trends
Chorus:
No need to justify…
I think I see what’s going on
Your logic is awfully sound
Too bad it’s bleeding out your eyes
No worries it’s hardly noticeable
Saturated in a plastic pale disguise
V3/Bridge:
These pills will make you happy
These pills will make you sad
These pills will try to rectify
The life you never had
I’ll see you in the mourning
I’ll see you in every rack
Laugh out loud you bastard
Cause your not going to be right back
Chorus:
No need to justify…
I think I see what’s going on
Your logic is awfully sound
Too bad it’s bleeding out your eyes
No worries it’s hardly noticeable
Saturated in a plastic pale disguise |
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over-drive
ubw newbie
Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Rotherham
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 5:30 am |
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You have a way with words, its realy good,i really like the bridge keep it up mate  |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Thu Mar 09, 2006 2:42 am |
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I liked most of this, and I agree with o-d that the bridge is nice... The only thing I didn't like, and it's only because of my preference, was the reference to the O.C. I read it, and I thought, "I didn't care think about that show right now." Again, that's just my preference, and in looking past that, I'd say you wrote a really good song.  Plus..., that's a very small part of how I felt about what ya' wrote. -I'm sayin' split-second thought there. lol. So, take it easy, and keep writing. Later!! |
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Aubrii
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 21, 2005
Posts: 152
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| Posted: Sat Mar 11, 2006 5:20 pm |
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