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LYRICS: "Undone" by Shallow Palace

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witcheru
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Joined: Oct 15, 2004
Location: Erie, Pa
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Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 10:32 am Reply with quote

Hey you...
Ya really got it goin' on
you love it you hate it more,
and hey man...
whats on your mind in the corner
over there....
I thought I'd race you...
think you've won,
now that I'm undone..

I have been
misunderstood here,
thinking I am broken down,
I have been
misread, I am fine...
hey you...
Love that I'm undone...

Hey Friend...
whats this love it so you
leave it thing...
oh yeah
must have really loved it,
really loved it
you were never here..
but, I've won..
I am undone...

I have been
misunderstood here,
thinking I am broken down......
but I've won...
Love that I'm Undone

Hey you...
ya really got it goin' on
love it, you hate it more,
and hey friend....
hey friend.....
I am undone....

hey you....hey you...
hey friend...

Ru 2005
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3647

Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2006 8:09 am Reply with quote

I enjoyed thse Ru! I like the way you use repetition to your advantage, changing up the phrasing but maintaining the main message. Nice job!!!
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mittins
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Joined: Nov 05, 2004
Location: erie,pa
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 3:08 pm Reply with quote

At's my girl.
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