smili
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Location: Nashville TN
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| Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 10:29 pm |
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Tyler, good guitar sound in the recording. You've got a really strong voice. I like the melody in the verses. I like the way you've done this song, but I can also see it as part of a bigger production if you wanted to do that. Lyrical story song. Nice twist on the lyrics at the end.
My only comments might be:
- it is long, but there's a strong story to carry it.
- I can really hear a musical interlude with more instruments, and perhaps a bit of bridge or different musical break at some point.
good tune. enjoyed listening. smili |
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