haggisthebadger
ubw rookie
Joined: Jul 17, 2005
Location: NORWICH ENGLAND
Posts: 93
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| Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 12:41 pm |
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just some stuff for a laugh... feel free to take the piss :-)
Goodbye my freind,
its time to go,
its cold out side
I'm off down below
its the place i've got to be,
i can hear it calling me,
i can feel it in my bones,
i'm goin there to build my home.
till next time,
you take it slow,
its not too far,
get your arse below,
cause,
its the place i've got to be,
i can hear it calling me,
i can feel it in my bones,
i'm goin there to build my home.
its not cold outside,
its not cold inside,
fires always alight,
its not cold outside,
its hell,
its hell,
lets just burn in bloody hell,
its hell,
lets just burn in bloody hell........ |
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sixtysecondminute
ubw rookie
Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 7:51 pm |
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I realy like the chorus to this. For some reason though I can imagine it being sung to some whacked out country and western style music... and I think I can safetly assume without checking the style of your music that it is not country and western.
If this is "Just for a laugh", I would be interested to see what your actual writing turns out like... as the song has alot of depth for somthing which you did not intend to be entirely serious (or so I would imagine by title).
Keep it up,
Tom  |
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I only write things for a giggle 
