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dirt
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| Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 2:29 pm |
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I hear your name whistling in the wind,
it brings a smile to my face sends shivers down my spine
In your eyes I see the stars, even the vastness of the oceans couldn’t keep us apart,
I’d follow you to heaven I’d follow you to hell,
Even if you passed away, I’d see your smile on every face,
Even if we’d never been, I’m sure we would have met, for now and for always I’ll love you till I die.
Turn me onto,
Something new and beautiful,
You say that 2 + 1 is 2,
You could never be more right,
I take your word,
You took my heart,
Into the light,
Dance with me through the nighttime,
Stay with me for a lifetime
Romeo and Juliet are no story compared to us,
We’ll be happy forever no twist in the plot
You make me laugh, you make me cry, and you helped me through the bad times
Chorus
Hold me close
Hold me near
And I’ll say the words you want to hear.
You know your mine
We’re meant to be
Nothing will come between us
Hold me close
Hold me near X 4 |
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sixtysecondminute
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Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
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| Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 3:25 pm |
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Wow. This is some great stuff. I especially like the chorus!  |
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sixtysecondminute
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Location: Solihull, UK
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| Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 3:29 pm |
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Oh... and I just realised fool. We already have a song called close to me. Remember much?  |
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dirt
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| Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 4:53 pm |
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well i changed the title  |
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sixtysecondminute
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Location: Solihull, UK
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| Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 7:46 pm |
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I changed the line I wrote in the chorus (" 2+1 is 2") to "black is white". I liked the melody for the original line... but this way should avoid retards pointing out the mistake and it also adds a nice little rhyme whilst keeping the same message. Bah. I'll probably see you or at least speak to you before you read this... but with it being 2 in the morning I'll probably forget, so yeah  |
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