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pkuk22
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Joined: Dec 16, 2005
Location: Huddersfield, west yorkshire, england
Posts: 1
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| Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 10:21 am |
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Just joined up to this place, if anyone can be bothered listening to this please give me some comments/advise. This track was completely made up on the spot, no forthought other than what key its in, so expect mistakes galore i tried to keep this track middle eastern flavoured in its feel, i hope i achieved this. Maybe i'll tab this out and clean some parts up and record it again, hopefully doesn't sound too bad.
http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/bands/6072/index.php
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KeithCP
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Joined: Oct 19, 2005
Location: Toronto, Canada.
Posts: 19
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| Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 10:45 am |
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I like the opening loop, chilled and peaceful tune, my suggestion would be to lower the volume on the lead guitar and drop the reverb / effects a little. I like the creativity although it's hard to hear the other tracks over the high volume of the lead guitar. |
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cazzagoo
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Joined: Dec 21, 2005
Location: london
Posts: 6
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| Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 10:48 am |
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That sounds really cool and relaxing. Obviously it sounds a bit muffled so maybe you might need to get it mastered( if you havent already!). It may j ust be the sound quality of my head phones that make it distorted as well. Its not my kind of music but in a strange way i get it, so well done mate! |
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