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Will
ubw rookie


Joined: Dec 08, 2005
Location: Half a mile from Rehab, one mile from home
Posts: 119
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| Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 6:29 am |
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©WillBlythe2005
When dawn comes I wanna be
In a paradise oh, so free
When the mornin' comes to me
It's the beuty I wanna see
So fed up of wars
And all things gone before
Seems they like to shut doors
Instead of keepin' the laws
The sun is rising in the morning sky
And I can hear them seagulls cry
It's the start of something
Risin' up outta nothing
And I know that if we keep goin'
And if we never start slowin'
We should see somethin'
Risin' up outta nothin'
Wanna walk without fear
Wanna live without tears
Wanna hold somethin' dear
Wanna see a peaceful year
The sun is rising in the morning sky
And I can hear them seagulls cry
It's the start of something
Risin' up outta nothing
And I know that if we keep goin'
And if we never start slowin'
We should see somethin'
Risin' up outta nothin'
And all I can see now
Are the people start to rise
It's gonna be a new world
And we got the fight in our eyes
The sun is rising in the morning sky
And I can hear them seagulls cry
It's the start of something
Risin' up outta nothing
And I know that if we keep goin'
And if we never start slowin'
We should see somethin'
Risin' up outta nothin' |
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over-drive
ubw newbie


Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Rotherham
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 6:04 am |
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I like these lyrics a lot, i like the fact that the first two bits rhym completly
very well writen, the rest of the rhymin keeps the Rythem
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Soulfish
ubw luminary


Joined: Nov 07, 2004
Location: Brighton
Posts: 704
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| Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 7:36 am |
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Nice to see a bit of optimism creeping into your as always insightful and intelligent work sir..  |
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Will
ubw rookie


Joined: Dec 08, 2005
Location: Half a mile from Rehab, one mile from home
Posts: 119
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| Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 8:14 am |
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thanks guys.
Soulfish: Optimistic? Me...nah never happen  |
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