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sixtysecondminute
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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2005 7:09 pm Reply with quote

I try to sleep,
But I can't turn my mind away from you tonight,
f**k the sheep,
I'm counting down the seconds till I next lay eyes on you,
I know that you know every thing that's going on here,
I know that you know, what I feel, yeah,

Sitting across the room, has never been so far away,
I've had no sleep, but I have never felt more awake,
The distance between us, beyond reach, but I will get there in my mind,
My arms are weak, but they will hold you, tonight,

I try to hide.
You're filling every corner of my mind,
I try to find,
A reason not to let you in, theres no excusing,
The way you barged in, uninvited, but I like it,
Now, there's no way I'll ever escape, yeah,

Sitting across the room, has never been so far away,
I've had no sleep, but I have never felt more awake,
The distance between us, beyond reach, but I will get there in my mind,
My arms are weak, but they will hold you, tonight,

Sitting across the room, has never been so far away,
I've had no sleep, but I have never felt more awake,
The distance between us, beyond reach, but I will get there in my mind,
My arms are weak, but they will hold you, tonight,

I will hold you tonight.
I will hold you tonight.
I will hold you tonight.
I will hold you tonight.
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Bullet41
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 5:32 pm Reply with quote

Wow thats really good. I could picture myself singing it, which is a good thong. I like the way you said something about the sheeps, sorry i forgot what you said, but its really good. 5/5
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Optikal_Delusion
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Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:32 pm Reply with quote

This was really enjoyable! I liked it alot!
especially :
Quote:
Sitting across the room, has never been so far away,
I've had no sleep, but I have never felt more awake,
The distance between us, beyond reach, but I will get there in my mind,
My arms are weak, but they will hold you, tonight

Really good work.
Do you have any music or even an idea for what kind of music you'd sing or have the words sung to?
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sixtysecondminute
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Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 6:24 am Reply with quote

We sort of half wrote this yesterday during practice.

I wouldn't know how to describe it to you realy. I can barely remember it, so it'l probably get changed again.

We've got a new lead guitarist/ backing vocalist and drummer now though... so expect some (atleast 5, and probably re-recordings of about 5 of the old ones with better equipment) new recordings some time soon.

Thanks for the feedback guys Smile
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RiCterMan
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Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 12:28 pm Reply with quote

I like it, man. -Very nice job. Later!
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