Bullet41
ubw rookie
Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Bracknell
Posts: 120
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| Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 5:46 pm |
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I sit here dreaming,
while me spirit is screaming,
" is this a memory i'm seeing,"
because my eyes are bleeding.
I wait here in the dark,
preying " Don't take my spirit far "
my life is flashing orange,
bleeding away my courage.
I try to cry away my pain,
hoping for it to be my emotional rain.
I'm running away from myself,
tring not to repeat the past.
( Please someone help me from me )
(i'm to young to leave! )
I wait here in the dark,
preying "Dont take my spirit far "
my life is flashing orange,
bleeding away my courage.
I hope this bullet replaces the scar in my heart.
I WILL NOT REPEAT THE PAST
I WILL NOT REPEAT THE PAST
I WILL NOT REPEAT THE PAST
I WILL NOT REPEAT THE PAST
WHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH AHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHA
i wait here in the dark
preying " please god don't take my spirit far "
my life is flashing orange,
bleeding away my courage.
i will not repeat the past. |
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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 3:15 pm |
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Wow. amazed to find this amongst the old topics. Usually stuff gets reviews by other users before getting this far down the list. But i digress... THIS IS GOOD. I really like it.. a lot.... no shit senor.. I think the first verse is my favorite  Keep on writing!!!!! |
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