DamnaNefas
ubw rookie
Joined: Nov 01, 2005
Posts: 67
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| Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 10:27 pm |
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Forgive me God, For i have sinned;
I've been kept uneager and locked within
a shallow heart with walls gone thin.
People always laugh aside from me at life's evil spin,
A reckless twist of events to feel humor about
but i just don't feel the smile creak on my worried face.
It was awful, really, the day i felt compelled to shout-
at the gluttoning people 'round and glad in their miserable place.
What worth is to rejoice when you lose what means most?
Have i overrated life, or are they just this dense?
I am only fortunate to enhale a small dose of their humor and boasts.
I'm rarely left alone from the presence i hate, which is the idiot's lack of sense.
Lose your detail in what you call a "joke"
what meaningless rush can be felt from this personal assault?
It makes me weary to hear your dead breath in fear of making me choke.
It is not a blunder i've seen, but life, and at your fault.
(people always joke about things that mean something to me. This is sort of what i tried to make the poem about. The beggining might not make complete sense (.."for i have sinned"), but i'm always recognizing my issues and admitting my faults in front of people who seem to deny their own problems. ) |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:35 pm |
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My dad does this sometimes with things that are important to me. But you just gotta' know that some people don't understand the importance of certain things to another person. Like in the case of my father, he never means to offend me or anything, and I know this, so I pretty much just let that stuff go. However, if it's people at your school, and they're all doing it at once, that could offend most people. Anyway, Good job.  Later! |
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