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martinsmonkey
ubw newbie
Joined: Nov 05, 2005
Location: southampton
Posts: 4
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| Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 6:15 pm |
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[B] half in[/B]
well it's been tried
and it's been lost
and when it's gone i stumble on
just what it cost
i guess i choose
or atleast i find
i walk in blind with my eyes wide
i guess i'm dumb
i forget what i try to say
i lose it all
i find my way
only to lose it the next day
oh it goes on
on and on
it's been too long
yeah it's been too long
it's been too long
where do i go wrong
well it's been done
and it's been said
too many times for it to fit
inside my head
well, i get through
but only just
i wouldn't trust my chances of
getting to you
oh i begin where i cant start
i get half in then i lose heart
i give it up
i fall apart
oh it goes on
on and on
it's been too long
yeah it's been too long
it's been too long
where do i go wrong
any thoughts let me know?! 
martins_monkey@yahoo.co.ukmartins monkey |
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DamnaNefas
ubw rookie
Joined: Nov 01, 2005
Posts: 67
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| Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 6:30 pm |
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It doesn't make much sense to me...and i don't know why, but it has a nice tune to it. The rhymes are kind of cool, and it could make a great song altogether. Nice Job, dude. |
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martinsmonkey
ubw newbie
Joined: Nov 05, 2005
Location: southampton
Posts: 4
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| Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 7:22 pm |
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thanks man
it's just me generely maonining, saying i've tried it all lost it all ,again and again so many times i cant count... but it's just the same old mistakes,
and it's been going on too long !  |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:31 pm |
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I think this is something I'd have to hear to get a better idea of it. I'm not trying to say it's bad or anything. I'm just not completely sure of what I think of it right now. Maybe someday we'll all hear it. Later, man! |
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