RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 4:36 pm |
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I just finished this about, I dunno'..., fifteen, twenty minutes ago... Anyway, I've kinda' been thinking about a lot of weird shit lately- stuff about what "soul travel" would be like, if possible. I think it would be nice. So, this is about that stuff. It's called "Carry it Over". -Hope it's alright...
"Carry it Over"
-Rick, "RiCterMaN," Strayer, fecit.
(Musical intro, envisioned)
Transport me away-
out from the shell that keeps me in.
-Beyond the atmosphere
that hangs above...
Release me to grace.
This volatile air keeps closing in.
Tension and streaming tears
surround the calm.
-Soul thrives on.
These feelings are a bore...
My heart sits on a cold floor...
The wait is on. -A wait for life
to carry my soul abroad.
(Chorus):
Let it drift
lightly, freely,
whisping around,
like a feather, in a summer breeze.
Send it and let it glide.
-Resting, knowing,
simply, that the ground
remains far under
the state of serenity.
<2x>Let it rise...
I need to escape
into a gentle realm of emotion.
Just let me disappear,
to find a pause...
I'm seeking a place
that withdraws weariness.
-Off of our tilted sphere
that we moap upon...
-Soul cries on.
These feelings are a bore...
My heart sits on a stone floor...
The wait is on. -A wait for life
to carry my soul.
(Chorus)
<2x>Let it rise...
(Short Interlude, envisioned)
(Words to Bridge):
-No cares at all(!).
-Face with a smile; no anxiety.
-Melt in the warmth.
-Slip for a little bit.
-No fear of gravity.
-Still only just a dream...
(Chorus)
<3x>Let it rise...
Carry my soul over stars.
EnD
That's what came about, and whether or not it's good, I hope it was a fun read for some of you. It was definitely fun to write... Later! |
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DamnaNefas
ubw rookie
Joined: Nov 01, 2005
Posts: 67
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| Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 6:28 pm |
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I think this could very possibly be one of your best works, no joke! I was really intrigued by the subject; i've been researching informantion about dreams and related ideas similar to them...such as out of body experiences. I don'y necessarily believe there is any truth in being able to leave your body (even for a moment), but it's still very interesting to me.
Extremely nice work, Again. (: |
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Later, Jessica!
