sixtysecondminute
ubw rookie
Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:17 am |
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I walked straight passed you today,
You failed to notice me,
I watched you walk away,
So gracefully, gracefully,
No matter, it's, no matter to me,
I fail to matter so easily,
No matter, it's no matter to me,
Nothing matters,
No matter how far away you are,
You're never further than the back of my mind,
No matter how far away you are,
You're never further than the back of my mind,
You walked right through me today,
I failed to exist,
I wish I was (as) invisible,
(as) You make me feel,
No matter, it's, no matter to me,
I fail to matter so easily,
No matter, it's no matter to me,
Nothing matters,
No matter how far away you are,
You're never further than the back of my mind,
No matter how far away you are,
You're never further than the back of my mind,
No matter what day it is,
No matter if it's rain or shine,
No matter what time it is,
I'll be waiting for you,
No matter how cold it gets,
Outside,
No matter, it's, no matter to me,
I fail to matter so easily,
No matter, it's no matter to me,
Nothing matters,
No matter how far away you are,
You're never further than the back of my mind,
No matter how far away you are,
You're never further than the back of my mind,
No matter, it's, no matter to me,
I fail to matter so easily,
No matter, it's no matter to me,
Nothing matters, |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 4:07 pm |
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Tom! Welcome back, man!
This is rather interesting. -Interesting, because normally I wouldn't enjoy something repetitive. But the way you wrote this made it, like I said, interesting, and I do like it a lot. Great job.  Later! |
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DamnaNefas
ubw rookie
Joined: Nov 01, 2005
Posts: 67
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| Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 6:37 pm |
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Yeah, it gets a bit repeatitive, but i really loved these lyrics!
I connect to them so well, because i've been feeling this way all month. I especially loved this:
No matter how far away you are,
You're never further than the back of my mind,
You described the situation so well. Nice job, really! Keep writing, please. |
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