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DamnaNefas
ubw rookie
Joined: Nov 01, 2005
Posts: 67
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| Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2005 7:52 pm |
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<i erased, sorry. I just can't find that damn "delete" button.> |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 11:13 am |
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First, Jessica, the UBW is the best "music family" in the world, and that means you have friends here. 
Second, rhyme and flow aren't important in poetry sometimes. I felt this was a great form of expression, and that is always important in poetry.
Third, I understand how ya' feel, with the situation with your mom and your brother. Although, interestingly enough, I was the one who had to move out, when my mom created problems.
Kids in school will never change, and that's just a part of life.
I'll be around here, and you just try to feel alright. Later, Jessica! |
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SaveYourSoul
ubw newbie
Joined: Nov 10, 2005
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 7:01 pm |
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Hey i really liked it man you are a damn good writer. I know i might sound like i am trying to sell my lyrics but i think both of us are going through the same thing. I just wanted to say hey and also tommorow night i might have my most crazy lyrics yet i am getting nervous/anxious/excited thinking about it but dude your a damn good writer i wish i had your talent. |
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DamnaNefas
ubw rookie
Joined: Nov 01, 2005
Posts: 67
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| Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:56 pm |
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SYS- Your talent is just as good as mine, and i'm flattered by the comment!
I'm glad people can relate to the lyrics...i feel now that i possibly could have done a better job on them, but now it seems too late. Thanks again, everyone. |
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