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SaveYourSoul
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Joined: Nov 10, 2005

Posts: 30
Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2005 7:13 pm Reply with quote
Hey I forgot my password and I used to be SYS. Here is some of my new lyrics. Its been a while so I am a little rusty but please post comments.

One more night HELPME HELP ME tomorrow I travel DON’T TRAP ME DON’T TRAP ME its my last night in this fake world tomorrow is my time to break out F**K UP THESE CHAINS they don’t make me just here to keep from the one who controls me
I am wandering wondering just collapsed I found out who controls me its ME

Your words don’t count
Your words don’t make me
Your words pretend to cover up me
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Talk is cheap
Better you keep one eye open when you sleep
Your words just don’t satisfy me

One more punch at me and then it will be your turn to feel how it is to bleed. I am the one you laughed at. I am the one you ignored at. I am the one you couldn’t look at me at. I see your fake grins but now it’s the final sin. When I take this knife cut you cut you cut you cut you cut you cut you F**K YOU F**K YOU F**K YOU F**K YOU
you or me who will commit to the final sin

Your words don’t count
Your words don’t make me
Your words pretend to cover up me
ACTIONS ACTIONS ACTIONS
Talk is cheap
Better you keep one eye open when you sleep
Your words just don’t satisfy me

Then I realized I cant stand up to you. You have me on your strings. Pull me left I walk left Pull me right I walk right. All this SHIT was a dream. For one day I wish I can rip out the knife break away the strings and F**KEN OPEN my hand full of my dirty little sins.

Your words don’t count
Your words don’t make me
Your words pretend to cover up me
ACTIONS ACTIONS ACTIONS
Talk is cheap
Better you keep one eye open when you sleep
Your words just don’t satisfy me

Like a bullet to the head Like a bullet to the head Like a bullet to the head Like a bullet to the head. Instantly I will make your rules DEAD
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DamnaNefas
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Joined: Nov 01, 2005

Posts: 67
Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2005 7:54 pm Reply with quote
You sound pissed...hope things are okay.

Pretty good...violent. I like the part about bullets. I love the word "bullet" for some reason.
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 10:58 am Reply with quote
I like how it's packed with emotion, but I must say, unless I heard it vocally, I don't know how I'd feel about the repetition. I know things like that can work when you sing them, but just reading it here, it seemed to be too much for me.

However, I also hope you're doing alright. Wink Sometimes, the people around us can be so irritating. But whomever this may be about, just be thankful that you're not them. Take it easy! Later!
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