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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 10:20 am |
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This is a medaphorical expansion of the term, dream-lover. Don't think Mariah Carey... Her high-pitched squeels scare me too. But yeah, that's pretty much all that needs to be said about these lyrics. It's title is, "Onerous Reality".
"Onerous Reality"
You're kindly optical.
You're soothingly, refreshing.
You're uncontrollably, enthralling,
but you are oneiric,
'cause you're not real.
(Pre-Chor.):
You're not real...
You're only a wish, that I desire to come true.
(Chorus):
-Caught in my head...
If only you were actual.
I would be so much better off
with you as mine.
You'd be my treasure,
kept forever in my chest.
-In the same heart that beats, with hope that you
will someday be, actual.
You'd be my "perfect world."
You'd gracefully, intrigue me.
You'd undeniably, escalate me,
but imaginative,
you're still unreal.
(Pre-Chor.)
(Chorus)
(Short Interlude, envisioned)
(Words to Bridge):
In my hope...
I have seen you alive(!),
and letting me hold you(!).
In other worlds...
You call to me(!);
I wish for you.
Low and behold...,
I fully understand(!),
though it leaves me atremble inside, at times,
I don't deny it.
(Pre-Chor.)
(Chorus)
This reality is-
reality is-
reality is
oh so,
onerous...
EnD
I hope anyone reading, enjoyed that. I'm kinda' rushin' to get out of here and do something, so I'll be around. Later! |
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DamnaNefas
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Joined: Nov 01, 2005
Posts: 67
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| Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:34 pm |
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heh, i was thinking about something similar to this today...
I am a huge daydreamer, and i'm also a sloth who doesn't get out enough to become social with people. I only find love in my dreams. So i was drawing this person in my dream today, and anyway...-blahblahblah- >.o
I find certain connections in a lot of your works, and i think they're very real. I only write mostly about my emotions, not that this one doesn't have any. It seems lonely and helpless feeling. |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:43 pm |
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Dude, I know exactly what you're feeling, as far as not being able to socialize much.
I don't usually bring it up too much, 'cause it's pretty depressing, but I made some huge mistakes, with no such intent, and now I pretty much feel like a prisoner in my father's house. If I went into detail, I'd feel like a downer, but I basically need a job, don't have a way to get out and apply, and it just messes everything up. I'm about to turn twenty-one, on the 25th, and I'd much rather have a life, as well as my own place.
But to end this reply in a positive manner, I know that when I find a way to get out apply, and get a job, that everything will start moving a lot faster. Knowing that makes it a lot easier to feel good. Like right now, I feel fine.  Thanks for the feedback, man.  Later! |
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