DamnaNefas
ubw rookie
Joined: Nov 01, 2005
Posts: 67
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| Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 6:15 pm |
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Forshame! Have you caught me at a moment!
My eyes at peek of bleeding black
My wasted time has made my knowledge lack.
I yearn to scream words of hate
Keep talking, it's much too late...
"Shut up! Yield! Give me a break!
I swear it's coming, so be silent for your sake!"
a gentle whisper poked fun i couldn't cope
which ignited my neverending mope...
"Shut up, Shut up! I've had enough!
You, in the form of an idle creature, better learn right
or come home to a dreadful gore sight!
Mute this disgust that promotes me to cuss,
Am i just locked in a room to hear your f**king weak fuss?
Lecture your own life on its disablities and zero power
I'll dismiss myself from your views and gladly 'cower.'"
(this poem seems like it got cut off...=/) |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 9:50 am |
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It does seem to get cut off, but I like it a lot. If you were to adjust it (the last part), it would be even more enjoyable to others, but it's already very nice. Later! |
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