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DamnaNefas
ubw rookie
Joined: Nov 01, 2005
Posts: 67
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| Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 6:12 pm |
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I hate the girls with their heads up high;
they are the ones who flare indignant pride.
I leave for home to sweat death and scream a guilt-filled cry:
They are the ones who should have died!
Your mothers cuddle you in splendid joy,
knowing all along you were an accident born.
Oh, how you'll act like a disrespectful toy,
and your child too will be a bastard to mourn.
Scowl at me in disgust and selfish warped view;
you could have been born a failure like me!
But Your overrated features make the world's worth spew?
I cannot cope to understand who you think you could be.
You've been given an insipid, cheap path.
I've been given the pitiful truth by feeling this envy burn!
and for you to glutton on life and overshadow my wrath,
I cannot describe how your fate will be so evily stern. |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 9:46 am |
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Dude... Nice work. Your writing is good to me, because everything I'm reading seems to have a different substance to it. Keep it up, man! Later! |
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DamnaNefas
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Posts: 67
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| Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 4:34 pm |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:32 am |
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No problem.  Later! |
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