DamnaNefas
ubw rookie
Joined: Nov 01, 2005
Posts: 67
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| Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 5:36 pm |
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Sacrifice nothing, i'll be right here at night.
I'm waiting for the moment to make your death just right.
I am so likely to ending this deception that keeps leading me on...
Enough of these silly games for your laughless hearts to yawn!
Forsake you from my heaven, for we don't share the same god!
Oh, how i've planned your face to feel for your thoughtless fraud...
Countless years but at a lonely young age,
My miserable imperfection soughts to redeem its patient rage.
Burn! Flame in your already frail form!
It has no more impact on my defiled mind incapable to reform.
These habits of mine are of splendid waste
If they'll never experience this treason of yours and its wicked taste!
When could you possibly stand worthy to this dried up and ditched soul
Who was once owner to a plump heart but now a burnt hole?
I have made my final repent
And by strength will you by condemned by this "lament!" |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 5:43 pm |
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Damn.... *Applauds ya' for this* If I'm making a mistake, by thinking this is a poem, I apologize, but none-the-less, poem or lyrics, it's some of the best work I've read in the forum since I joined, in June. You're new here, so just to let you know, I'm not a suck-up, or anything. My feedback is always as honest feedback as I can give. So welcome to the UBW, and great job! Later! |
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