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TAlderson
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Joined: Jun 11, 2005
Posts: 68
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| Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 3:39 pm |
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So, I wrote this a few days ago. It's short, but if I add a harmonica solo to it it should work out to 3 mins or so.
Cold Wind (Working title, best I could come up with)
A cold wind cries across a barren field
The tears of those left to sob alone
The blood of the wounds that never have healed
The footsteps of those without a home
A cold wind blows across a desolate plain
The last breaths of men left forgotten to die
The gasps of a thousand left bloodied and slain
The whispers of those begging to get by
A cold wind howls across a dying land
The screams of young children being carried away
The begging of millions for a helping hand
The cries of those who'll never again see the day
So, that's it. Might think up more verses later.
-Tyler |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 10:43 pm |
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Dude, I love it. It's very poetically written, and I think you did a great job. Later, Tyler! |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 5:07 pm |
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*applause* Can't wait for any additional verse that may come! Very nice! |
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Guitarman152
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Joined: Aug 03, 2005
Location: Hamden, Ct. . . .USA
Posts: 719
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| Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 5:22 pm |
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very good, that's a big . . .  |
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