RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 3:26 pm |
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This is a poem that I'm about to write as quick as I can. It's supposed to be odd and humorous, but if I explained what it was about, you might have some vomit-filled moments within seconds. But we'll see how this turns out, and if anyone cares to know about it's subject, just PM me. Now..., Let's do this.
"This Discomfort; No Love"
Oh, how you hurt me.
-Grown to be a large mass.
-With pain and discomfort.
I could scream, but I'll pass.
If I stabbed you, I'd stab me,
and I'd probably fall backwards.
You became, and your name,
became "anatomical bother."
But don't misconceive.
Yes, indeed, I'm in need
of you to stay with me.
I just want some relief.
-First sight, of your change,
brought the thought, "Soon, my casket."
In this day, I can see,
That I'll surely get past this.
-And I'd love to detach you.
But I'd lose every seed.
You are mine, without love,
but at least..., this shall cease.
EnD
This actually took a little longer than I intended to spend creating it. -About an hour. Also, it probably seems dark and depressing, but honestly, if the subject was visible in the words, many people would think, "Wait...; he wrote about what?!?!... That's weird." But ya' know what...? -I like to be weird. 
Like I said, ask in a PM, and I'll tell you what it's about. But be forewarned, it's kind of graphic, and may upset your stomach. -Hope some of you enjoyed this. I gotta' go print it out, so I have a copy somewhere. Later!  |
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