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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 11:46 pm |
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Hell and Heartbreak
Lost and broken. Sad and hopeless.
Dying to live, only to die again,
Without purpose, cold and lifeless.
I gave my heart to you.
Dedication of my love, my heart I bid you,
Good night and sweet dreams
From all I've lived through
Painkillers and arsenic, kiss me good night.
So long, the dedication to the love of my life.
If life is but a fragile dream
For those blissfully unaware.
We find together when we wake
The movie history of my life
Is God's own personal nightmare.
Dawn turns to dusk as I cross the field
And as dawn comes again, I regretfully yield
To my memories of those who found
Happiness in another's arms.
Dedication of my love, my heart I bid you.
Good night and sweet dreams
From all I've been through.
Painkillers and arsenic, kiss me good night.
So long, the dedication to the love of my life.
Times will change; memories fade.
My love for you will not.
And as the moon might wax and wane
And things shall never be the same
My love for you shall remain
Etched in stone, a painful memory
Of the many I knew and the few I loved
Who touched my heart and made it bleed.
A hemorrhage of memories.
Dedication of my love, I hope that this will find you
Happy in another's arms; not left out in the rain.
Dedication of my love, my thoughts will never leave you.
Dedication of my love, give you joy, steal your pain.
Dedication of love, my heart I bid you.
Good night and sweet dreams
From all I've lived through.
Painkillers and arsenic, kiss me goodnight.
So long, the dedication to the love of my life |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 12:31 am |
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This is Crazy! -But in a good way. The way you wrote it was very gripping, and I definitely liked it a lot. Great Job. Later! |
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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 5:33 pm |
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Thanks! Wrote this last night. One of my friends from New Orleans is "taken" and I just now found out and I cried for a fair time before I wrote this. Feel much better.
Cheers! Anne |
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hereafter
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Joined: Jun 28, 2005
Posts: 133
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| Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 7:39 pm |
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is in indeed amazing. i love it.
| Quote: | Painkillers and arsenic, kiss me goodnight.
So long, the dedication to the love of my life |
Im obsessed with that line |
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Guitarman152
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Joined: Aug 03, 2005
Location: Hamden, Ct. . . .USA
Posts: 719
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| Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 9:13 pm |
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Anne, this is very good indeed . .
"If life is but a fragile dream
For those blissfully unaware"
well said . . . "For those blissfully unaware" . . . I really like this line a lot
Props,
Erick . . .  |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 8:39 pm |
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gracias. tried just kinda making up a tune for it- its not going to be what i had hoped, but it'll be sort of a soft punk rockish feel if that's possible.
Cheers! |
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DamnaNefas
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Joined: Nov 01, 2005
Posts: 67
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| Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:01 pm |
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That was great!
There's nothing more i can think to say about it... |
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coolguyguy
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Joined: Feb 23, 2005
Location: manteca CA.
Posts: 15
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| Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2005 12:40 pm |
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This Awsome It's relly cool. |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 7:51 pm |
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Bullet41
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Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Bracknell
Posts: 120
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| Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 7:51 pm |
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Wow Green Day would be proud of that.  |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2005 11:33 pm |
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Wow! Thanks I suppose.. even having Green Day look at this would make me happy!
Check out my new one- Meth September |
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