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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 7:49 am |
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Feeling stuck, f**ked up, and stupid.
Pissed at teachers. Don't they know it?
Been doing this for ten damn years
Shouldn't I be good by now?
This place sucks- I wanna go home
But not there, not now
Cause then I'm never alone.
This life sucks. Hell do I know it!
Shut up, I give up, screw you, go f**k it!
Leave me alone. f**k off. Go away.
Can't you tell I'm not okay?
Leave now. Why don't you go away?
You're pissing me off on top
of everything else that has happened today
Just shut up please. I need to get back to myself right now.
This place sucks- I wanna go home
But not there, not now
Cause then I'm never alone.
This life sucks. Hell do I know it!
Shut up, I give up, screw you, go f**k it!
Leave me alone. f**k off. Go away.
Can't you tell I'm not okay?
I know I've been a b**ch.
Damn sassy and mean.
But I'm sorry! I mean it! Please,
now's just not a good time.
Just stand back and let me cry.
Look away while I die.
This life sucks. Hell did I know it.
Shut up! I gave up! Screw you! Go f**k it!
Leave me alone. f**k off. Go away.
Drop it. Let it die- couldn't you tell
I wasn't okay?
If you'd listened, I'd be dead.
Driven to the edge, in over my head
Cut my wrists, knotted the rope.
Your deaf ears saved my life. My soul. |
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Guitarman152
ubw luminary
Joined: Aug 03, 2005
Location: Hamden, Ct. . . .USA
Posts: 719
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| Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 8:40 am |
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wow, this is good, that last line is fantastic . . .  |
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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 9:55 am |
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Gracias! Wee bit of background: wrote this after receiving a gorgeous 77 on my algebra exam. pish. |
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over-drive
ubw newbie
Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Rotherham
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 12:39 pm |
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i realy liked that its very well writen it all flows and yes the last line is good, good job  |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 4:30 pm |
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Very creative, and it shows your emotions well. Nice work!  Later! |
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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 9:39 pm |
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Thanks guys. *weak grin* Expect another one coming soon. Considering breaking up the "band". Return isn't making any progress. Writing lyrics, but Red's got other bands going on the side that actually have a chance. Can't take a whole lot more of this. Can't stand the life I'm living- school, sports, the band, guys. I just can't take it anymore.
Cheers. |
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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 11:29 pm |
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New song up. "Hell and Heartbreak" |
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