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Guitarman152
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Joined: Aug 03, 2005
Location: Hamden, Ct. . . .USA
Posts: 719
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| Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 2:12 pm |
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this is a song me and a friend wrote a while back. . . .I'm working on the recording now and hopefully soon, I can up-load it . . . . it's called "What is"
What is time
but a tool to be used
The day is a precious gift
don't let it be abused
Time is what we have and time will surely tell
if what we're trying to say can be told
to every heart that's growing cold
What is Life
but a treasure forever
What is the word
well is has to be Love
What is Love
but to care and share forever
Life is what we have and Love will lead the way
it's such a precious gift, Love holds the key
to a better life for you and me
a better life for you and me
a better life for you and me
What is what is what is
love is love is love is . . . forever
The end................. |
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over-drive
ubw newbie
Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Rotherham
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 2:35 pm |
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well done with that song its like simple idea but it sounds right i would like to listen to it when you do up-lode it i enjoyed that the rhyming works aswell |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 10:43 pm |
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I agree with over-drive. I definitely enjoyed it, and it's written quite nicely. Good job.  Later! |
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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 8:12 am |
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*applause* I like quite much. Do tell when the actual song is up. i love the lyrics! |
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Optikal_Delusion
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Joined: Aug 22, 2005
Location: Australia
Posts: 73
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| Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 4:50 pm |
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Great lyrics! Upbuilding and reminds me that life is a gift that won't last forever and the love is the greatest gift I could give or recieve.
How do you write lyrics and put them down in music so fast?!?
I'm so jealous or should that be envious...?
I still haven't put my lyrics to music yet...
Working on it tho 
Catch you later. |
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Guitarman152
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Joined: Aug 03, 2005
Location: Hamden, Ct. . . .USA
Posts: 719
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| Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 8:56 pm |
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thank you all for the feedback . . . 
it's going to be a while before I can finish the recording of this, my equipment is ancient and I'm having trouble with the belts (yeah I said belts) lol....old anolog tascam porta 2, I can't find replacement belts anywhere.
If anyone knows of someone who has a tascam porta 2 I'd be interested in buying it or the belts that go with it, I need a rewind belt and the play/record belt.
Thanx again . . . . .  |
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