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over-drive
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Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Rotherham
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2005 3:28 pm |
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Hey its me just wondering what you think to my most resent song its called lost
Lost
Im feeling all these emotions i no i shouldnt
You told me to lay back i said i couldnt
Too many times you left me in the dark with no light
& then like a fire all of my pain ignights
All my emotions were buried down deep inside
And now i see them eroupt coz my faith has died
Now not even time can heal this scar
The light infront of me is much too far
I feel lost in this great river of hate
Nobody can here me when i shout
Please forgive me if i ever hurt you
BUT im stuck now with no were to hide
AND im scared now with courage to show
The agony swollows me and im left here bleeding
Is there anyone out there are you lisetening
To a word i say i dont no why im still here
i cant go anywere without feeling over powering fear
i feel so ignored and now wonder if i even exist
What happend to the great world of uncontrolable bliss
But tonight im here in music all the feelings disapear
Hate anger pain sorrow rejection guilt and fear
I feel lost in this great river of hate
Nobody can here me when i shout
Please forgive me if i ever hurt you
BUT im stuck now with no were to hide
AND im scared now with courage to show
I feel lost in this great river of hate
nobody can here me when i shout
please forgive me if i ever hurt you
BUT im stuck now with no were to hide
AND im scared now with courage to show
someone save me i need your help
someone out the just listen to me
©2005 Alex cox
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2005 9:07 pm |
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quite nice. emotional.. roughly how I felt a bit earlier. Huzzah!
cheers- Anne |
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Guitarman152
ubw luminary
Joined: Aug 03, 2005
Location: Hamden, Ct. . . .USA
Posts: 719
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| Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 6:26 am |
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| over-drive wrote: | Hey its me just wondering what you think to my most resent song its called lost
Lost
i feel so ignored and now wonder if i even exist
What happend to the great world of uncontrolable bliss
But tonight im here in music all the feelings disapear
Hate anger pain sorrow rejection guilt and fear
©2005 Alex cox
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This is good, those 4 sentences I quoted you on are very good and deep and very well written! . . . 
Peace ,
Erick . . . |
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over-drive
ubw newbie
Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Rotherham
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 1:40 pm |
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hey thanks, i realy enjoy writing songs so its good to know that other people enjoy reading them does any one else want to vote or post here feel free |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 10:59 pm |
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Sure. 
The emotion is definitely strong man. Very good work. I'll go vote now.  Later! |
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