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DataBass
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Joined: Aug 09, 2004
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| Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 10:14 am |
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Hi everyone. Since I just landed here thought you might like to check out "Red County" in the New Songs bit. It's in the Electronic genre, but hey don't let that put some of you off, listen anyhow....Let me know what y' think, cause feedback to me is like so important.
Cheers everyone.
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unproject
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Joined: Jul 01, 2004
Location: Turkey
Posts: 2134
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| Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 10:31 am |
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here's the direct url to your track:
http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/play.php?band_id=329&song_id=795&mode=song_hifi
first of all nice avatar.
your track generally sounds a little dry to me, also transitions are very sharp, that is, synths/samples leave and enter the track very abruptly. there are also some clips at some points i think (not sure)
not being picky or anything but i think your track needs more variations by structural means. also outro was a little sudden?
i do not say it sucks but i think it needs a lot of work. u4ea (one of our members) also has a review thread for electronic stuff. if u need a more detailed review, u can post your track there.
it is good to see new electro-heads around here, welcome to the ubw.
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DataBass
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Joined: Aug 09, 2004
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| Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 10:44 am |
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Thanks for the comments. And be as picky as you like...how else are people supposed to learn, otherwise.
I see your points too.
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alek_acero
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Joined: Apr 23, 2004
Location: madagascar
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| Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 11:17 am |
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Hey Databass!
Welcome in the UBW world!
you've got interesting sounds! keep up the good work!
peace
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