Aubrii
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 21, 2005
Posts: 152
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| Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 4:33 pm |
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Look up at the stars
no need to squint
shooting stars
come shoot my heart
my wish will not be granted
because for every wish made
there's a wish broken
for every line read
there's a line spoken
too late to hear what i heard last night
too late to see those stars in the sky
can't wait to see you again my star
i wish that you weren't so far away
you wish you were here with me
i wish i was there with you
no way we'll both get what we want
no way we'll be together again soon
wishes don't come true for me
because for every wish made
there's a wish broken
for every line read
there's a line spoken
too late to see you this time around
too late to see you safe and sound
can't wait to see my shooting star
try again and wish real hard
every wish made is another wish broken
no one has read the lines that i've spoken
I'm tired of waiting here all night
just to find another regret in the sky
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yeah ok, i donno where this came from, I just wrote it on the spot. I'm like singing a tune allong with it, i wish i had my guitar and my keyboard right about now.  Let me know what you think
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minusme
Site Admin
Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3648
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| Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 7:12 pm |
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Nice Job!!!
I find my best lyrics typically come just as you mentioned, right no the spot!
I think these read well, and would work well in several genres. The simplistic, but in a good way.
Thanks for sharing!  |
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