sixtysecondminute
ubw rookie
Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 1:38 pm |
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H is for holding, these thoughts in my mind,
A is for answers, I never could find,
T is for turning, a page in my life,
E is forever, I'll hate you forever,
I don't know what you mean to me,
But it is ugly, and it is everything,
And I did it all for you, I'd do anything for you,
For you,
B is for broken down,
I's for 'I love you'
Two T's for the tongue-tied way, you make me feel,
E is forever,
R for the rose that's dead, and it died long ago,
I don't know what you mean to me,
But it is ugly, and it is everything,
And I did it all for you, I'd do anything for you,
For you,
For you,
abhorrence, abomination, anathema, animosity,
destination, detestation, disgust, dislike, enmity,
execration, grievance, gripe, hatred, hostility,
ill will, irritant, loathing, malevolence, malignity,
You mean it all to me,
You mean it all to me,
You mean it all to me,
You mean it all to me, |
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hereafter
ubw rookie
Joined: Jun 28, 2005
Posts: 133
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| Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2005 8:12 pm |
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this is definatley very different, but i think thats why i like this one. it shows a very creative side, kind of a Kurt Cobain type thing, escpecailly this part:
abhorrence, abomination, anathema, animosity,
destination, detestation, disgust, dislike, enmity,
execration, grievance, gripe, hatred, hostility,
ill will, irritant, loathing, malevolence, malignity,
You mean it all to me,
You mean it all to me,
You mean it all to me,
You mean it all to me, |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 2:01 am |
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I missed reading your threads, Tom. Like artif.sweetnr said, this is definitely creative, and highly interesting. At first, I didn't like the whole Acronym type setup of the first verse, but then I read on and saw that you did it with a different word (not the same one, repeating), and it held my interest to the end after that. I also love the title, man. It's great stuff. Later! |
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