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over-drive
ubw newbie
Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Rotherham
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2005 11:28 am |
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Hey its me this is my 2nd song hope u like it can u rate it ta
You have changed so much
why do i feel like im losing you
your changing just coz of all ur m8s
be yourself every1 is best that way
dont change i feel you going again
stay with me we got to stay like
yourself this is your life
you have have changed so much
just to be called cool
no one cares anyway
i want the real you back
stop changin like the crowds
you want to be in i want
you to be more like you
and less like them
why do i feel like iv lost myself
im losing all i can bare i just slip
my friends are changin and
the left me behind im afraid
will i just fall i want to just
be myself but i feel so outcasted
you have have changed so much
just to be called cool
no one cares anyway
i want the real you back
stop changin like the crowds
you want to be in i want
you to be more like you
and less like them
i am all by myself again
sorry that i dont want
to change but this is me !!!!!!
you have have changed so much
just to be called cool
no one cares anyway
i want the real you back
stop changin like the crowds
you want to be in i want
you to be more like you
and less like them
you have have changed so much
just to be called cool
no one cares anyway
i want the real you back
stop changin like the crowds
you want to be in i want
you to be more like you
and less like them
©2005 Alex cox |
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over-drive
ubw newbie
Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Rotherham
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2005 1:51 pm |
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so those of u that can b bothered to read it what do u think id love to hear ur opinion thanx a lot  |
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dirt
ubw newbie
Joined: Jul 07, 2005
Posts: 23
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| Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2005 2:51 pm |
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It's good, not the best lyrics iv ever read. But it does have a pop-unkish feel to it. is this how it was meant to be? |
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over-drive
ubw newbie
Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Rotherham
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 12:06 pm |
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sorta i was just pissed off with my m8 coz he was just being so fake and stuff so i wrote about it. Thanks for ur opinion |
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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 3:17 pm |
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I like it, though it doesn't seem like you're pissed- you seem more sad and scared. If you were aiming for PO'ed, I don't think you caught it in this song... Still pretty good though. Mind checking mine out?
http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/ftopict-5805.html |
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