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My1DesIRIs2BEe10
ubw newbie
Joined: Sep 12, 2005
Location: Chandler AZ
Posts: 4
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| Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 9:30 pm |
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Here it Goes.
"Sweet Serenity"
So it seems like 45 minutes with her
Is the closest to eternity that I have been...
We sit and watch the rain pour down
And every drop that I experience with her, makes my heart skip a beat.
Because I love to hold her close
~This sweet serenity silently screams~
Because I love to kiss her lips
~This sweet serentiy silently screams~
We were on her bed inside her room.
The sacred smell of her hair made me tired
And I know, that with her near, or in her arms.
My worst dreams are turned into silence, sweet, sweet silence...
Speechless words and screaming silence
~Her love is like fire, and it burns my heart~
Tastefull love, and dust filled rain.
~Her love is like fire, and it burns my heart~
Dancing around in the rain
Laughing like children
Not a care in the world
Because her hand is in mine...
This sweet silent screaming serenity
Tell me why this love burns
Please, sweet silent screaming serenity
Tell me why her love is burning inside of me...
Could this be love?
Could this be it?
Either serenity is here, or serenity is near
But this burning love has evaporated the rain. |
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minusme
Site Admin
Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3647
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| Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 5:30 am |
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WOW!!!
Welcome to the UBW and nice job on these lyrics.
I love the way these read, and your writing style is very good. Your plays on words and imagery are awesome, BRAVO!!!!!
Ron |
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Guitarman152
ubw luminary
Joined: Aug 03, 2005
Location: Hamden, Ct. . . .USA
Posts: 719
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| Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 6:58 am |
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Ron said it in a nutshell . .wow! . . . very deep and revealing, I think it speaks for many in that situation . . . "serenity silently screams" you nailed it !!!
kudos,
Erick . . .  |
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hereafter
ubw rookie
Joined: Jun 28, 2005
Posts: 133
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| Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 9:44 pm |
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holy shit dude this is awesome, i dont no what more to say, i loved it. |
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