sixtysecondminute
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Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
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| Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2005 2:24 pm |
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I like the films where people die,
I laugh whilst other people cry,
"I'm sorry sir, but you have aids",
or how about some hand grenades?,
A car chase works, but where's the crash?
Drug deal gone wrong, killed for the cash,
Or what about, an overdose?
Your time is up, the endings close,
It's realy not an ending if,
The main character's not blown up, or dead,
Or murdered, or dissapeared,
All hail to thee sweet tragedy,
Where happiness is travesty,
They all died miserably,
Ever after,
I like the films that don't add up,
Leaves people thinking "what the f**k?"
Why don't you mess about with drugs?,
Or play around with loaded guns?
A love scene works, but where's the blood?
A group of children all murdered,
Or how about a shower scene,
We see the cuts, and hear the scream,
It's realy not an ending if,
The main character's not blown up, or dead,
Or murdered, or dissapeared,
All hail to thee sweet tragedy,
Where happiness is travesty,
They all died miserably,
Ever after,,
They all died miserably ever after,
They all died miserably ever after,
They all died miserably ever after,
They all died miserably ever after,
It's realy not an ending if,
The main character's not blown up, or dead,
Or murdered, or dissapeared,
All hail to thee sweet tragedy,
Where happiness is travesty,
They all died miserably,
Ever after,
They all died miserably ever after, |
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hereafter
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Joined: Jun 28, 2005
Posts: 133
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| Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2005 8:28 pm |
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this is interesting, not your best but still creative in its way.
i do LOVE this though:
"All hail to thee sweet tragedy,
Where happiness is travesty,
They all died miserably,
Ever after,"
very nicely put. |
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sixtysecondminute
ubw rookie


Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 2:46 pm |
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| hereafter wrote: | this is interesting, not your best but still creative in its way.
i do LOVE this though:
"All hail to thee sweet tragedy,
Where happiness is travesty,
They all died miserably,
Ever after,"
very nicely put. |
yeah. This was realy just messing around... but I realy liked that part of the chorus, so re-wrote it for use in another song.
All hail to thee sweet tragedy,
Where happiness is travesty,
They all died miserably,
Ever after,
A broken-hearted monarchy,
Where sanctity is treatury,
They all died miserably,
Ever after, |
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