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SYS
ubw newbie
Joined: Aug 24, 2005
Posts: 7
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| Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 8:46 pm |
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Well this was written a couple of months ago and I sort of like put it away and now I just found it and decided to share with you all.
Carrying Me Away
Are We Friends
(Best Friends Always Stay Together)
I am shocked nervous disoranted
What do you Expect
(I am a failure)
I am shocked nervous disoranted
I am in complete disorae
No order
What do you expect
(I am a failure)
Running Away
Crawling Away
Stuck in a tunnel
Lights out
Burnt out
Just dont call me a trator
(Just need hope)
(Your my scapegoat)
And I just need a friend
Buddy cant you guide me with your hands
I need someone to get me through this
Battle(Landmine) Need Help to escape
Please dont let my blood dry up
and my skin wrinkle up
What do you expect
(I am a failure)
What do you expect
(I am a failure)
Running Away
Crawling Away
Stuck in a tunnel
Lights out
Burnt out
Just dont call me a trator
(Just need hope)
(your my scapegoat)
So Buddy (friend)
Whats going on
So Buddy (friend)
Whats going on
So Buddy (friend)
Whats going on
My heads spinning out of control
I DONT KNOW
(Just Leave me alone)
Running Away
Crawling Away
Stuck in a tunnel
Lights out
Burnt out
Just dont call me a trator
(Just need hope your my scapegoat)[I]
I thought you knew
You Lied
You told
I am the failure
F*** you
F*** you
F*** you
I was never your friend
just your
stupid scapegoat |
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SYS
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Joined: Aug 24, 2005
Posts: 7
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| Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 7:15 pm |
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sixtysecondminute
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Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:57 am |
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I like this song.
It has a realy nice flow to it, and the bracketed parts (which I am assuming will be sung by a second vocalist) realy fit in well to the main part and work nicely into the song.
I can't realy see any faults. Nice work  |
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