artificialsweetener
ubw newbie
Joined: Aug 05, 2005
Location: indiana
Posts: 40
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| Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 6:53 pm |
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i wrote this about 6 months ago...its sort of all over the place...i dunno...its ok, maybe?
There you were to save the day
I really never thought you’d show
But you surprised me
It wasn’t the first time
It won’t be the last time
I can never be sure what’s on your mind
I said this is the first day
Of the rest of my life
You said don’t waste your breath
You’ll be needing it later tonight
And oh, the subtle ways
Our once simple lives are run astray
Happiness never seems to
Stick around in this place
We’re paralyzed in memories
Of fleeting ecstasy and
Living every moment in the chase
To feel that way again
It’s not that you really should have
Ever had such an impact on me
But you caught me so off guard
You’re way too good
For your own damn good
I can never be sure what you’ll do to my heart
I said this is the first time
I’ve ever felt this crazy
You said baby that’s real cute
But what exactly do you want me to do?
I called you tonight, no answer again
I’ts probably better, I had nothing to say
I can’t believe I’m just letting this all fade
While I stumble around and drink you away
But that’s who I’ve always been
With responses so much weaker than my dreams
It seems as though you don’t even notice
But I should know from my own life
That nothing’s really how it seems… |
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hereafter
ubw rookie
Joined: Jun 28, 2005
Posts: 133
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| Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 6:59 pm |
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this is really good,i liked it. this song is very true. its something i or pretty much anyone could relate too.
i liked these two parts the best:
"I called you tonight, no answer again
I’ts probably better, I had nothing to say"
and
"While I stumble around and drink you away
But that’s who I’ve always been" |
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