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artificialsweetener
ubw newbie
Joined: Aug 05, 2005
Location: indiana
Posts: 40
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| Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 12:26 pm |
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so this song isnt great, but its a true story...so that makes it a little better...i wrote this a few months ago right after my good friend/ex-boyfriend got in a really bad car accident and was flown to a hospital, and we all thought he might not make it. at the time, we had been in a fight and hadnt talked for a couple months, so i panicked thinking i'd never get to set things right...but, he pulled through...and i wrote him a letter and he wrote one back saying that almost dying put everything into perspective and blah blah and everything is fine with us now  sooo yeah, here's the song.
it was storming outside that night
the cars collided
tears drenched my face and I couldn’t fight it
4 days ago, I thought I lost you forever
and my world came crashing down
i was put face to face with all
The things that I’ve done wrong
Such selfish thoughts in my head
“you cant leave me like this” I said
just give me one more night
dry these tears from my eyes
let me apologize
let me justify the lies
we cant leave on these terms
we were each other’s firsts
you broke my heart and I broke yours
but life’s just way too short
I swear I’ll never be so quick to judge
Just stop holding on to this grudge
Hold on, for everything you’re going to be
If you won’t hold on for me
I’ve never been the praying kind
But I was on my knees
Begging for a miracle to bring you back to me
4 days ago, my faith was reborn
when I heard the telephone ring
and the news that was on the other end
was like 1000 angels singing
You almost paid the ultimate price
But it opened up both of our eyes
And brought you back to me
If I ever keep a promise
It’ll be the one that I make now:
I’ll be so worth your sacrifice. |
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En-En
ubw rookie
Joined: Apr 30, 2005
Posts: 81
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| Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 1:41 pm |
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ay i was readin ya shit and i tink it aint rap coz ders no rims
but i stil rad ya ting and its prity good i mean da min idia gets in da had
its aait aait fo real |
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hereafter
ubw rookie
Joined: Jun 28, 2005
Posts: 133
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| Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 3:06 pm |
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out of everything i read here i love reading yours the most. this is soooo good i cant even begin to describe it.
(Such selfish thoughts in my head
“you cant leave me like this” I said)
i love this right here. its so true and weve all thought it at one time or another. keep it up and keep them coming |
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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 4:55 pm |
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| En-En wrote: | ay i was readin ya shit and i tink it aint rap coz ders no rims
but i stil rad ya ting and its prity good i mean da min idia gets in da had
its aait aait fo real |
I don't think I'll ever be able to talk to people who just write like this- imagine talking with them! Anyhoo- this is a great song. I likes it! |
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