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SYS
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Joined: Aug 24, 2005
Posts: 7
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| Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2005 9:36 pm |
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When in the end I say Secrets it is quiet and kind of creepy sounding if you get me. It lasts for a long time as the end of the music happens. Well tell me what you think.
Here is where we used to cry
Here is where we used to cry
Here is where we used to cry
Here is know where we lay to die
Have you ever wondered
how you will be remembered
How many people will sob and cry
When they see you going 6 feet under
What will they write on your tombstone
How will your friends react
When your dropping 6 feet under.
BEcause sometimes suicide
is the only way to survive
Here is where we cry
Here is where we cry
Here is where we cry
Here is where we lay to die
Will they know your secret possessions
or will they have been thrown out
in the cold
Will anyone remember my serious side
or just my friendly jokes
When I am down 6 feet under
Who will find out the secrets I told
Will there be anyone thinking of the days of old
Will any of this happen when I am six feet under.
Because sometimes suicide
is the only way to survive.
Here is where we used to cry
Here is where we used to cry
Here is where we used to cry
Here is where we now lay to die
These questions
Running Along
When I was at the bottom
I fealt so cold
With this bottle
I drink the feelings
all down to the cold
Just I ask for something
for you to remember me as
The boy
who never told (Secrets) |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2005 9:42 pm |
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I like- a tad depressing, but I like. |
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zeo211
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Joined: Aug 22, 2005
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| Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2005 9:58 pm |
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Kind of reminds me of my self. I never really tell secrets. I would change it to like the boy who never told...(pause) SECREATS |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2005 10:10 pm |
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thinking about it now, you're right- only i forget secrets before I can tell anyone  |
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SYS
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Joined: Aug 24, 2005
Posts: 7
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| Posted: Sat Aug 27, 2005 10:34 am |
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Zeo thats how it sort of flows when we sing it. |
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Aubrii
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Joined: Aug 21, 2005
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| Posted: Sat Aug 27, 2005 11:05 am |
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I love te lines " because sometomes suicide is the only way to survive" for some reason, i don't know why. |
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hereafter
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Joined: Jun 28, 2005
Posts: 133
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| Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 1:06 am |
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yea i totaly agree that is definatly the best line, very good. over all teh whole thing is good. keep it up. |
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