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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 8:46 am |
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Bite my lip: close my eyes
So damn sick of all these lies
If it's so easy for you,
Why don't you give
A hint or two?
But as it is, same old same
Everything I do is so damn lame.
As far as it goes- this is bullshit!
If you're so f**kin' cocky,
If you're just so damn right
And you've got nothing good to say-
Get it through your damn head-
PLEASE DAMMIT! SHUT IT!
But as it is, same old same
Everything I do is shit- lame shit.
But as far as you go- YOU"RE F***KIN"
FULL OF IT! |
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Bullet41
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 9:14 am |
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nice song.it sounds abit like an green day song dont you think |
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deltarain
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Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 9:43 am |
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Dunno- I was so pissed when I wrote this. Now that I think about it, you're right. Do you think that'll affect whether it'll sell or not? |
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deltarain
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:26 am |
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I used one of the lines from Longview- "Bite my lip and close my eyes" but thats really it |
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Bullet41
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 2:29 pm |
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| deltarain wrote: | | Dunno- I was so pissed when I wrote this. Now that I think about it, you're right. Do you think that'll affect whether it'll sell or not? |
Yea if you make it sound right. |
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deltarain
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Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 3:17 pm |
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Bad effects, or good ones? |
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amazonblonde
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Joined: Jun 16, 2004
Location: Detroit
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 5:48 pm |
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is alot of your influence with green day? |
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deltarain
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 5:54 pm |
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For the most part, yeah. Jimmy Eat World is another. Blink 182, Yellowcard (those two may just be me!) Some Switchfoot (again, maybe just me!) |
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artificialsweetener
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Joined: Aug 05, 2005
Location: indiana
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| Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 6:31 pm |
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good song, but you might just wanna change the first line, since its a green day line word for word lol |
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zeo211
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| Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 7:10 pm |
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sixtysecondminute
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| Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 9:26 am |
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| artificialsweetener wrote: | | good song, but you might just wanna change the first line, since its a green day line word for word lol |
'darkness trapped within (closed/these) eyes,'? |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 10:48 am |
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nice- it shall be changed!
gracias! |
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