SakuraAvalon
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: Birmingham, England.
Posts: 8
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 7:15 am |
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Perfect Chaos (Rap/Metal)
Forever Alive (Demo) Lryics.
Lryics Created on : 23/08/05
Lryics By Peter David Craig O'Hanlon
Lryics © 2005 Perfect Chaos. All Rights Reserved.
|Song led in by Keyboard|
|Followed by Base Guitar|
|Followed by Electric Guitar|
|Followed by Drums|
|MC Only| |Verse 1|
I'm standing here in the corner of this Dark room,
Listening to the Crap that come's 'Outcha Mouth,
'Yall acting like your gunna live forever,
Acting like your short life 'aint Ever gunna end,
But the time has come to stop Kidding 'Yaself,
Cus you know that you 'aint gunna Live forever,
You know that you 'aint gunna be Forever alive.
|MC And Vocal from MC + Guitarist| |Chorus| |X= MC Part, Z = Vocal part|
Z : The end is coming soon, So please stop kidding yourself.
X : Watch them flee when they find out there Lifes 'Gon end.
Z : And if you carry on this way, Then your life will be consumed by Guilt and Lies.
X : So cut yourself free, Before it's too late to change.
|MC Only| |Verse 2|
I Hear the Bullshit that you Say about people like us,
How we are not actualy Rock, And we can't even play,
'Yall Gotta start listening Closer, Cus we don't give a f**k about what you say,
What, Don't Understand? Got shit Between your Ears or something?,
The Shit you say and the shit you do are two completely different things,
You need to make up Your f**king mind, You Rap/Metal or not?,
Sorry, But I'm just hitting you with Honesty, Cus I aint got nothing to hide,
Unlike you, Sorry But you won't be Forever alive.
|MC And Vocal from MC + Guitarist| |Chorus| |X= MC Part, Z = Vocal part|
Z : The end is coming soon, So please stop kidding yourself.
X : Watch them flee when they find out there Lifes 'Gon end.
Z : And if you carry on this way, Then your life will be consumed by Guilt and Lies.
X : So cut yourself free, Before it's too late to change.
|MC And Vocalist| |Bridge| |X= MC Part, Z = Vocal part|
X : Come on, Follow me into this Darkness
Z : The Darkness of the Corner of the room
X : If you wanna hear the crap they talk about too
X : Come on, Follow me into this Darkness
Z : The Darkness of the Corner of the room
X : If you wanna hear the crap they talk about too
X : Come on, Follow me into this Darkness
Z : The Darkness of the Corner of the room
|MC And Vocal from MC + Guitarist| |Chorus| |X= MC Part, Z = Vocal part|
Z : The end is coming soon, So please stop kidding yourself.
X : Watch them flee when they find out there Lifes 'Gon end.
Z : And if you carry on this way, Then your life will be consumed by Guilt and Lies.
X : So cut yourself free, Before it's too late to change.
X : If you wanna hear the crap they talk about too
Lryics © 2005 Perfect Chaos. All Rights Reserved.
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 11:33 pm |
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Very nice.
I do have just a small suggestion: Try to be less harsh. Not all people are as open minded to other types of music, or specifically, rock, as some can be. This is very good writing, and I see it for lyrics, and not just a certain genre.
Don't get me wrong; if a rap/metal act comes along, and they are truly talented, in my opinion, I think it's a great genre. For instance, I've always liked hed(pe). When I saw them live, I was really impressed. Welcome to the UBW, Sakura. Later! |
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