RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 12:20 am |
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This was written on the same day as the last song I posted ("Sweetest Disclosure"). It's called, "An Ill Prognosis", and it's about people judging others based upon how they look. It was inspired by something somoeone close to me asked, soon after I got back from my trip. People who judge others like that can very well end up so consumed by their self-righteousness, that they may lose respect from some of their relatives. Me, I don't judge based on appearance. I judge based on purity of a person's soul, and their general personality. This is what I wrote:
"An Ill Prognosis"
Take your life
seriously
before you're drained of potential.
You need to see
before you reach the "pitch-blackness" of a hole.
Your wonderful world
could lead you into a curled
anotomical curviture.
(Chorus):
You could end up coiled up, uptight.
-Dying in what you fantasize
is so attractive to you.
Your "easy breeze, on top of the world"
thoughts are illusions.
I see them for
what they are. You're
starting to burn, star.
Don't burn away.
Take your life
seriously
before you're drained of potential. (Down you'll go...)
You need to see
before you reach the "pitch-blackness." (-Of that hole...)
Your wonderful world
could lead you into a curled
anotomical rupture.
(Chorus)
(Bridge):
Back- There you go.
Back- There you go...
(-Lowering to the floor.)
There you go.
Back- There you go...
Back- There you go.
Back,
Back, Back.
There you go down.
Just to tell you,
position could go back
to fetal.
(Short Interlude)
Back to fetal.
(Chorus)
Think. Choose. Accept prelude or consequence.
EnD
That's all for that one. The words in the bridge look really weak here, but this is another one of those parts I wrote that needs to be heard to be fully understood. They are weak, but the way that I sing it makes it unnecessary to write it in a more abstract manner. I really hope you guys enjoyed this, and if you've read any of my earlier posts, you'll know I love feedback if you'll give it. Later! |
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