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northernlibra
ubw newbie
Joined: Jul 25, 2005
Posts: 18
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| Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 5:39 pm |
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Question of sense
Do you
Do you think, do you
Think, so easily, pink
Do you, do you
think. Are thoughts
from others ment to link.
please don't hesitate to confront me on that Q
I should've known if you're not sure of what I do
but anyhow, I don't worry, so why should you?
please don't hesitate to confront me on that Q
That's a thing I've been wondering, you know
why are nice guys always ending up like trash
trying heroic to become a friend and
it all turns down to one account with zero cash
Do you
Do you hear, do you
Hear, a rainbow, tear
Do you, do you
hear. Are sounds
from heaven ment to scare. |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 6:52 am |
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Hey! -Just wanted to give a lil' reply... This, to me, is not your best. However, I don't know how it sounds when you sing it aloud, so I never judge lyrics based on the way they look. It's very nice. Good job, man! Later! |
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northernlibra
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Joined: Jul 25, 2005
Posts: 18
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| Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 12:29 pm |
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Hey, man. It ain't a lyric at all. Just some words I wrote down and wanted to share. I have no musical talent, what so ever.
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 1:11 am |
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Really...? In that case, very nice words.  Honestly, they looked like intended lyrics to me, so that's why I gave that kind of feedback. Keep posting, man. Later! |
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