silent_stoneface
ubw newbie
Joined: Aug 08, 2005
Location: around a place that youve never been to.
Posts: 2
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| Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 1:46 pm |
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So, this won't be the best thing you've ever read, but I am hoping its not the worst. I wrote in when this situation was going on and so it came out more rapish than anything else cause of the anger and stuff.. it was like this, my "best friend' started saying she was gonna screw around with this guy I really like. I had told her I was kinda into him and we had been hanging out and stuff for weeks, then she meets him and starts "flirting" aka acting like a ho and he went from liking me to pretending to like me for aback up pretty much. the girl is 14 and he is 19 so it was pretty f**ked up she was even talking like she was. but whatever.. here it goes.. dont totally distroy my thought that this is an okay piece please haha
I won't stay quiet
You say you are just friends?
Then why is she in the back of your truck
That's how I thought it was, f**k!
I knew that you just were friends 'cause
She'd give you a little bit of something
A lot more than I would ever even think about givin' you
Before I was twentysomething
Don’t lie to me jerk
Or give me that sexy little smirk
your little "I'm so sorry."
and her saying "We really love you too much,
to ever let this go too far!"
Well then why was it her that you touch
late at night in your car?
All this pity bull shit
is enough for me for me have a fit
You did what you did
are you man enough to face that?
I didn't think so.
You piss me off
You have no idea
oh much you just piss me off
CORUS
you knew that I wouldn't stay quiet
when have I ever stayed quiet?
society thinks a woman should be silent
but I got news that just don't work for me.
I'll expose you for you you are
you ain't no shining star
and now everyone knows about it.
All around town the girls are gonna get to talkin'
my girls will get the word spread so fast it will be shockin'
you should have known not to mess with me
because you'll get the best of the fight in me
and you don't want that.
no no cause I am never afraid to get up and to bat
for my self angainst you
you got me after you
and now what you gonna do?
I am sorry doesnt make it all vanish
the fact that you think it does seems so outlandish
Your foolish boy
yeah you just were born to annoy
weren't you?
I must stay strong and remember
That I will find someone better by September
yeah, thats right I can find someone better than you
in just a week or two
don't that just suck?
You treaten you'll find someone new to f**k?
ha, good luck.
No one will top me, your stuck.
And you know it,
yeah you know it,
and it kills you yeah you better just show it.
It kills you deep inside
every night you cry
boy don't even try
to hide
that from me.
I see
that you see
you screwed up permently
but are you gonna change anything?
GUYS VOICE: yeah girl, I promise
I really do
You know you mean the world to me...
Oh shut up, I know not having me
will only leave you with your own insecurities
but get over it boy
stop acting so damn coy,
your a player and I know it so...
CORUS
you knew that I wouldn't stay quiet
when have I ever stayed quiet?
society thinks a woman should be silent
but I got news that just don't work for me.
I'll expose you for you you are
your ain't no shining star
and now everyone knows about it.
All around town the girls are gonna get to talkin'
my girls will get the word spread so fast it will be shockin'
you should have known not to mess with me
because you'll get the best of the fight in me
and you don't want that.
no no cause I am never afraid to get up an go to bat
for my self angainst you
you got me after you
and now what you gonna do?
I know you lied
Both of you did
Not that I have ever cried
Or would have ever tried
I couldn’t shed a f**king tear for you
I’d have to be fuckin’ kookoo
I’ll never be blue
Over you
Or her
Or all the shit you both had to stir
Up in my brain
Causing all this pain
Deep inside
I knew you lied
Long ago
But no
I had to play it stupid
Had to believe that cupid
Wanted us to be
The key
To one anothers heart.
I knew that you were
Not so sure
You even wanted someone to be with
But apparently you did
But someone who was just a fuckin’ kid
Your sick man
You make me sick, where’s the can?
CORUS
you knew that I wouldn't stay quiet
when have I ever stayed quiet?
society thinks a woman should be silent
but I got news that just don't work for me.
I'll expose you for you you are
your ain't no shining star
and now everyone knows about it.
All around town the girls are gonna get to talkin'
my girls will get the word spread so fast itll be shockin'
you should have known not to mess with me
because you'll get the best of the fight in me
and you don't want that.
no no cause I am never afraid to go up to bat
for my self angainst you
you got me after you
and now what you gonna do?
You know that eminem concert we saw
Wasn’t that so fun? Aw.
You know his song puke?
It does kind of spook
Me how much I think
That song fits me now
Oh gee
I guess that is mean to say
But you know when you say
You want to lay
Girls who still play
In f**king sand boxes
I am intilted
To say whatever I want
About you
I have every right
When you are running around at night
With some chick way to young for you
To say that you are a pervert
You are dirtier than dirt
Did you really go up her skirt?
You discust me.
So unbelievably
I can’t even keep my lunch down.
CORUS
you knew that I wouldn't stay quiet
when have I ever stayed quiet?
society thinks a woman should be silent
but I got news that just don't work for me.
I'll expose you for you you are
your ain't no shining star
and now everyone knows about it.
All around town the girls are gonna get to talkin'
my girls will get the word spread so fast itll be shockin'
you should have known not to mess with me
because you'll get the best of the fight in me
and you don't want that.
no no cause I am never afraid to go up to bat
for my self angainst you
you got me after you
and now what you gonna do?
Oh don’t even get me started on her
She has some nerve
Like she has the right learning curve
To ever serve
All of your needs.
Too bad you weren’t smart enough to know
That if you were to show
Just a little more respect for me
You would have gotten to be
With me
Without even having to plea
But instead you ended up with her
And she
Is still a girl.
She is just a guilty
She is just as filthy
She makes me as sick as you (Well almost...)
She was my friend
She made our friendship bend
More and more until it broke
And now I just wish I could choke
Her half the time
Because she thinks she’s ever
ever, so clever
but how ‘bout never?
CORUS
you knew that I wouldn't stay quiet
when have I ever stayed quiet?
society thinks a woman should be silent
but I got news that just don't work for me.
I'll expose you for you you are
your ain't no shining star
and now everyone knows about it.
All around town the girls are gonna get to talkin'
my girls will get the word spread so fast itll be shockin'
you should have known not to mess with me
because you'll get the best of the fight in me
and you don't want that
no no cause I am never afraid to get up go to bat
for my self angainst you
you got me after you
and now whatcha gonna do?
I miss us but I know that I have to be stronger
And better
And Wiser than that.
Scropio is my sign
And boy Im so fine
You’ll never get me off your mind
You’ll always remember how you f**ked it up.
But that’s good, yup
'Cause I don't want you to
Cause if that always stays with you
You will never do it to another woman
We deserve more respect than that
More than some punk ass little brat
Who thinks he’s all fly with his trucker hat
Shut the hell up and listen to me
You need to be
Better than you are
The next girl to get in your car
Better actually mean something to you
Or at least be more than some girl you want to screw.
Glad you took the time
To listen to my little rhyme
My little rant
Next time you want to call me but realize you can’t
Just turn this little ditty on and let it run
And remember that your not the one
You’ve since been outdone.
Yeah.
CORUS
you knew that I wouldn't stay quiet
when have I ever stayed quiet?
society thinks a woman should be silent
but I got news that just don't work for me.
I'll expose you for you you are
your ain't no shining star
and now everyone knows about it.
All around town the girls are gonna get to talkin'
my girls will get the word spread so fast it will be shockin'
you should have known not to mess with me
because you'll get the best of the fight in me
and you don't want that.
no no cause I am never afraid to get up and go to bat
for my self angainst you
you got me after you
and now what you gonna do?
yeah I said whatcha gonna do?
Whatcha gonna do b**ch?
f**k you.
Thanks for reading  haha |
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hereafter
ubw rookie
Joined: Jun 28, 2005
Posts: 133
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| Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 2:02 pm |
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wow that was incredibly long but worth reading every word. if this really was your first try dont make it your last, its was very well written and you have a lot of potential. I love the chorus thats what stuck out the most for me, very nice. rap isnt really my thing at all but i cant wait to read your next one.
oh and sorry about your situation,thats gotta suck. |
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