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northernlibra
ubw newbie
Joined: Jul 25, 2005
Posts: 18
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| Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 12:10 pm |
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Reaching for the yes
Born on this earth
on heaven and command
by tribes
"call up-on us"
with precious and demands
Prisoned to this feets
my mind escapes
through the rain and
down to the black cave saviour
Who was it found up rave,
anyway -
No woman can get the nectarine
no man does ever reach it
out comes the boogyman
mirror of his memoria
covered with sadness
Sleeping warm in the darkness
i am not as
you are zero
yes thoughts, no
no man does ever reach it |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 12:28 am |
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Wow... I'm mostly speechless, as far as compliments are concerned. Every single line is just... I don't know. Seriously. I have some more stuff to do on here though, but this is truly what it looks like when great lyrics are enscribed. -Very cool. Later! |
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JoeyK
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Joined: Aug 09, 2005
Posts: 9
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| Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 11:49 am |
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Wow, that's amazing. Wish I could write like that. |
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northernlibra
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Joined: Jul 25, 2005
Posts: 18
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| Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 12:19 pm |
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Hi guys. Thanks for your pleasant comments. I'm sorry to say I'm not that great to comment other works - neither my own - but I'm reading all your lyrics and great poetry.
Love sent
northernlibra |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2005 2:43 am |
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Honestly, I'd really like to know what you think about any of my lyrics threads, and it's because your writing is, in fact, very good when I read it. So, don't hold back, man. Just do what I, and many others, do; give your honest opinion. I just felt the need to say that. Later! |
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